To be honest with you: I will not add this map to special map list at this point. I dont think we need 3 versions of a map.
1. You are changing spots to make them look clean but you destroy those spots. You even change those spots in favor of CTs on a map that is already CT-sided. 2 examples (I already showed you many more on your cbble edit)
a) where is the small hide spot?
b) where is the small box to get edgerz?
2. I personally dont understand why you make a remake of a map that is already being remade by somebody else. I peronally like both the original (fixed and 100% working) map more and Zicke's version looks much more promising (further testing needed, but first tests were good)
Plus (my POV) this clean look looks like... unfinished. It looks like a test version made of plasterboard which needs interior construction. But we might have different tastes.
My best adivce to you is: Make maps for the community, it is very appreciated. But dont edit good maps to support your playstyle (autosniping from highground) as many players play this game differently. And those small edits you make might support your playstyle but it harms the playstyle of others.
Maybe other admins and players will like it more than me and will load it so we can gather more data, but I do believe both other versions are better.